And then I noticed that he used the word "electric" twice. I hate that so...
For Stevie and my own piece of mind, this is MY rewrite. The first draft is still posted, please ignore it.
While listening to Lullaby by the Cure
Hung out to dry on
Ironic crucifixes
built on heart break and
heart attack dalliances
condemned thoughts
The caress of lost hands
On electric archetype emotions
poorly designated blame
Another death row comedian
Gallowsed and catalogued
Names in wax and vinyl
Resembling headstones and
Mile markers
lost songs on a
road too often traveled
hands at 10 and 2
She never let them see her cry
never admits she can
winds her watch for
independence
grips the wheel
closes her eys
and sings along with the radio
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