Number 8
Repeat Yourself: Using Anaphora
Sometimes it’s a good thing to repeat yourself. Just look at all of these famous examples of anaphora. Hey, if it’s good enough for Shakespeare, Whitman, Dickens, and Blake, it’s good enough for you.
Anaphora is a device where a word or series of words is repeated at the beginnings of lines or phrases to create emphasis. (One of my favorite poems with anaphora is Miracles by Walt Whitman.)
If you clicked the first link above, you noticed that anaphora is not only used at the beginnings of lines of poetry, but also in prose. So your job today is to use a repeated phrase in a new poem draft
the poem
Would it all be the same
without the graphite lines on the wall
pencil lines on
faded wallpaper
time measured in inches
measured in scars
maybe it was the sign we were born under
or the alignment of the stars
or the way the light reflected on the faded roses
stained from the leaky roof
maybe it was the will of God
or the singing of some off key angels
how does one interpret a lifetime
maybe by the clapping of hands
or pebbles skipped across a raging sea
or the stories held in the things he held dear
the people who still remember
Damn graphite reminders of broken arms
do you remember?
does anybody?
Maybe you had to be there
or is it locked in the fabric, sealed in the walls
or is it really gone like a birthday flame
I swear it was yesterday when I
started
quit
caught my kid
smoking that cigarette
it's hard to read this wallpaper
it holds the tales of my lives
recriminations and weeping confessions
maybe it only matters to me
or it means a little bit more than everything
or it's just dirty roses and pencil marks on stained wallpaper
in a room that memories don't live in any more
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